Sunday, 17 March 2013

The Startle Artificial

I have heard this called morning
but I say it's still night.

Without the startle of the alarm
the artificial construct they call
going to work

I doubt
the wisdom of being awake,
up and about at such an hour

although, I suppose,
like most things
it brings compensations.
Solitude and silence
being the main ones.

8 comments:

  1. Well, that's a pair of brilliant compensations.

    And a poem as fine as this to boot... almost makes one wish to be awake.

    (At some later date, of course.)

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  2. Thanks Tom. I'll try and keep the noise down.

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  3. No, Jonathan, we need more
    Noise like this, alarming

    But in this case, less does not
    Promise to be more.

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  4. Done deal.Thanks for sharing your voice on this one.

    Now for some reason the shift key's stopped working. I've probably worn it out with my quiet noise.

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  5. wonderful and well said. I was actually discussing the very same thing earlier tonight.

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    1. Probably a common feeling for anyone who's had to grapple with a collar and tie in a dark bedroom while the rest of the family are sleeping.

      Thanks Brent. I'm glad I'm not alone.

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