Wednesday, 26 December 2012

New Morning, Dark Rain

A long, black car like a hearse parked on a gravelled drive.
A hollow filled with rain water and a door, of all things,
propped up against a box hedge. The hedge is unruly, wild
and tangled and one could fancy that the door
could be opened into a strange pagan hall
that leads into the dark underworld
where earthy tunnels, lit by spluttering lamps,
lead into a secret hall where invisible folk
celebrate the new morning of dark rain.

2 comments:

  1. The first 3+ lines set out with perfect observational clarity, as well as with appropriately grave solemnity, a finely woven fabric of realism; which is then, over the final 5+ lines, gradually unravelled (almost as if by magic) by the magic of fancy.

    This is quite lovely, said the old man -- impersonating the wild, unruly hedge even while straining, with rheumy eyes, and uncommon interest, to see what lies through and beyond it.

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    1. After yesterday's frolics,I look rather like the hedge myself. Thank you for this lovely comment Tom. Another to be treasured.

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