Friday, 16 November 2012

The Day Went By

like a blue plate
clumsily dropped
on a worktop
still slick from
being sponged
clean.

2 comments:

  1. Jonathan,
    Well done. Like the title leading into the first line and especially the tonal play on "uh": clumsily/sponged/from which resolves cleanly on the long "e."
    Cheers,
    B.R.

    You're on a flying saucer roll...

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    1. Well spotted Sir. Thank you so much...

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